I've been going through some of the shoujo manga on this list I stumbled across on the Internet because completed manga are somewhat harder to find and sift through. I've been picking out the more interesting looking ones and just browsing and to be honest nothing is really that exciting.
So the premise of this manga is a girl named Fumino and her little brother Teppei are orphaned and shuttled from one unhappy house to another until her teacher decides to end her suffering...permanently. Haha I made it sound really ominous right? But it's not really. Instead she demands he marry her and he really did...or did he? And so the entirety of the manga is based around the forbidden relationship between sensei and student and the awkwardness that comes along with the age gap between a more mature person and a person that is still developing. And it revolves quite a bit around the physical aspect of their relationship. One problem I have with manga is the fact that they dance around the forbidden nature of a kiss and sexual intercourse as if they were the same, and while I guess they both count as physical contact they're kind of on different levels, not to forget the fact that they kiss on the cheek and neck seemingly without a problem. That's just a sort of dissonance and skew in logic that I don't necessarily agree with. It certainly gave a lot of tension and suspense with the question of "
when with they kiss?!"
Even though this manga is a shoujo/slice of life mashup, it's extremely slow paced. It's actually the same arc over and over again. It goes love triangle, almost being found out, love triangle, almost being found out etc over and over. In terms of length it's pretty medium in duration with its 57 chapters, but they felt so long and drawn out. I personally didn't like the pacing and the fact that it was just the same arcs over and over again. I would've probably liked it more if there weren't so many of the same arc. I understand that repetition is unavoidable. If Fumino just accepted Kazuma's affections right away that would've been extremely unnatural and wouldn't have allowed for a more natural progression of their relationship. It allowed for Fumino's emotions to develop gradually, even though I think most high school girls would react differently in this case.
There were some small inconsistencies as well. For instance, Fumino is portrayed as a bit of a ganster-like figure, although I'd like to say that it was more of a hero for justice. It plays upon the cliche of the girl being strong, but not realizing that it's okay to rely on someone as well. There was definitely the strong emphasis of Fumino having to rely on someone else...but if she's able to punch a guy trying to harass her friend I don't think she'd need sensei's help quite so much.
In terms of relationships in the manga, they were a bit random. Like her uncle's relationship with his martial arts student. Pretty unnecessary, but cute at the same time. I guess that lent his psyche towards being more empathetic in regards to the relationship with a large age difference between sensei and Fumino. Ah, Kurosawa. The guy that showed up and had one of those spontaneous high school crushes on Fumino, promised to show her the benefits of having a boyfriend the same age as her...disappeared for a lot of chapters even though they were at school and could meet all the time...and then came back towards the end without making a move. And he wondered why it ended up like that. Consistency is key as we learned from the number of times sensei saved Fumino and showered her with affection. Something else kind of random and what felt a bit childish was Shouma's crush on Fumino. He already had Meg and it was almost established that they would go out, but in the end it seemed as though Shouma liked Fumino after she showed her good sides while admiring sensei. So I feel like all of these crushes are a bit superficial. They're all like "oh he/she's so nice and brave" without any other real substance. Fluffy.
Overall, if you're looking for something fluffy and doesn't take a lot of brain power you could read this. It's a medium read, perfect to download for a three or four hour flight. It's the same arc over and over again and it's not one you get super emotionally invested in. It's like watching a Disney movie, you know you're going to be satisfied with the ending so there's no real reason to get stressed out while the plot unwinds. I think there's better manga out there, but this is a pretty good relaxing one.
Here's some screenshots for you *throws confetti*
I would say that you could just read this for the little oneshot that's in the middle of the series because it's actually really good. I really enjoyed it.
He lifts.
I present to you Hell's Ma-kun turned Prince Charming.
This was actually one of the highlights. Teppei was such comic relief, but he made the series so enjoyable.
The dynamic between Kazuma and his dad is pretty common in manga, but it gets me every time
Shot to the heart. Poor Shouma
You really can't help but feel sorry for Shouma